been learning ableton for a while, finally feel i got the hang of it a bit

can ppl lmk what they think of this track, constructive criticism welcome haha ive listened to it so much now it doesnt sound like music anymore so feedback would b appreciated

first track ive fully completed, speedy g doing is ruff dub

https://soundcloud.com/mistermollusk/oo-tee-copo-mollusk/s-vbKumtUoWQz?si=c151a38af33640358e07f6af022ccd22&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

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