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Original Message 1/12 09-Aug-03 @ 01:44 PM - back with new track
Message 2/12 09-Aug-03 @ 07:09 PM - RE: back with new track
Talk to you later,
~Logik
Message 3/12 11-Aug-03 @ 09:07 PM - RE: back with new track
I listened to the track a few times last night and I was very pleased. It does need some work methinks. Absolutley flawless technical work- it sounds really pro.
The track to me lacks depth and "meatiness" if you know what I mean. I think it definatley needs some more pady-string type sounds in there. More airyness. It could also use some more elements like arpy sounds in the back or something. All the sounds you use are "in your face" in the front type sounds- you need more airy background stuff- especially where the bassline changes in the intro- that is a MUST.
The melody and the vocals are great! Again I think there should be more elements at the melody sequence. A pad kind of shows up- but not really. Bring that up front.
Over all I think it's great but it is dying for more shiznat in the song!! (at least what I think :D)
Good job!!
Andrew
Message 4/12 11-Aug-03 @ 09:08 PM - RE: back with new track
Message 5/12 12-Aug-03 @ 03:21 PM - RE: back with new track
Message 6/12 12-Aug-03 @ 08:02 PM - RE: back with new track
comfortably predictable builds and breaks, but well-constructed nonetheless. that arp sounds like one of broken silence's tho ;)
j/k... nice effort overall. nothing startlingly original, but once again you're showing you got production chops to spare.
Message 7/12 13-Aug-03 @ 03:56 AM - RE: back with new track
Message 8/12 13-Aug-03 @ 06:49 PM - RE: back with new track
Man, your music just oozes with this sense of optomism.
Go get depressed, get 'I want to smash everything and rip the world apart' angry and make a track, cause I'd love to hear what you come with!
Your stuff is nearly too nice! I mean, I listen to your tracks and I hear a person who absolutely loves what he does. And thats whats it all about.
Excellent skill, well presented and mixed... Maybe its not the most original of genres or open for experimentation... but good stuff nonetheless.
Cool pics Btw
Message 9/12 19-Aug-03 @ 03:20 PM - RE: back with new track
Vocals come in too early, kinda sounds confused at the very begining.
Synths come in really nice, nice key change at 1:35 ish
break is ok, but a bit expected in its construction, but then I do the same..
really cool trancey sounds, but like Andrew sez, it needs more meat. Neat track overall, well produced
nice one Mik!
G
Message 10/12 24-Aug-03 @ 07:12 PM Edit: 24-Aug-03 | 07:17 PM - RE: back with new track
Now that I listen to the track I think it could use some more pads and airy sounds like BS said. Maybe I'll continue with the track some day.
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O/d, I've tried to do more aggressive tracks.. Those rarely get ready. I have one hard trance track though, called Energy. The problem is whenever I'm angry I can't sit by the computer for a long time.
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Those vocals on the beginning somehow sound like they're on a wrong key though I forced them to notes on the scale.
Message 12/12 25-Aug-03 @ 01:44 PM - RE: back with new track
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