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Original Message 1/8 06-Aug-03 @ 04:20 AM - another new track

slowormvisions

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Hey all,

here is another track called Child..it features a really good singer.

Have fun.

Thanks in advance for the listen.

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Message 2/8 06-Aug-03 @ 05:15 AM - RE: another new track

Garuna

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Needs a bit of polish, but I really like this. Nice sounds, vox and melody.

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Message 3/8 06-Aug-03 @ 02:27 PM - RE: another new track

slowormvisions

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Thanks for the comment....I feel I always need to improve...it sucks but it is the way it is.

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Message 4/8 07-Aug-03 @ 04:33 AM - RE: another new track

Garuna

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What I really like is that you went and did a full song in one go. It's very impressive... original.... With some fine tuning you could get this out. Careful with the strings at 1:50 ... cool but out of tune... sounds like you used trails... Hmm maybe a remix with a tougher drum is in order.

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Message 5/8 07-Aug-03 @ 04:51 AM - RE: another new track

slowormvisions

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I always did think of remixing it a bit better, harder drums huh?

hmmm...

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Message 6/8 07-Aug-03 @ 01:07 PM - RE: another new track

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yeah you could get this out. kinda like what oakey used to play. dunno of he still does. could imagine hybrid or way out west doing a remix. or deep dish or someone now they're all prog. cool.

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Message 7/8 07-Aug-03 @ 05:26 PM - RE: another new track

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Hey,

Great vocals so far- I really like everything especially the bass- really catchy. Those ed up chords are so irritating- might be just me.

I really like the pads and great percs too.

Just double check this: the kicks were kinda clipping in my right speaker (slightly)...probably just it being shitty, but it's never done it before so it MAY be your track. Prolly not tho..

I definatley think it could get out- with some changes. The style is a bit old sounding. Also the biggest thing in trance/prog trance is flashy fills. Your fills sound fine, but they aren't "in yo face" enough I think. I'd say some more SFX on top of the white noise sweeps.

Great track!

Andrew

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Message 8/8 07-Aug-03 @ 06:37 PM - RE: another new track

slowormvisions

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Thanks bro,

Good review and suggestions, heheh the reason it sounds old is beacause it is, only 2 years old though.

Remix coming soon, and the right be clicking because i shifted the bass a tad because of the mix....so your speakers are ok.

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