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Original Message 1/29 16-Apr-02 @ 07:40 AM - Updated etiquitte....
instinctual libra 10-17-81
, aliteration of synthetiq intuition ,
simply searching...
let me know what you think...
www.dancetech.com/~cynikalambrosia
Message 2/29 16-Apr-02 @ 08:10 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
I listened, and read your take on this TWELVE MINUTE track, and...while some parts are interesting, I think you might be going just a little bit too far with it...
Message 3/29 16-Apr-02 @ 08:51 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
nice one tho'
woxy
Message 4/29 16-Apr-02 @ 09:38 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
listen, man...youd do yourself well if you sorta...slimmed it down a bit...
your descriptions are so over the top theyre rather humorous, and the titles? well...AT LEAST look in the dictionary if youre gonna use big words...
I am ONLY saying this because it WILL turn people off. NOT because Im the dick that some think I am...
Message 5/29 16-Apr-02 @ 12:09 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 6/29 16-Apr-02 @ 02:49 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 7/29 16-Apr-02 @ 03:25 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 8/29 16-Apr-02 @ 03:56 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
SOPHIST !!!
;p
Message 9/29 16-Apr-02 @ 05:54 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 10/29 16-Apr-02 @ 05:56 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 11/29 16-Apr-02 @ 06:14 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
happy 4th of july everyone !
Message 12/29 16-Apr-02 @ 09:17 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
this vessel (and one crewman spared for his bravery) and it's cannons became the key to kamehameha's unification of hawai'i. you think whitey goes back to the white people when they come? no fucking way, maan, he ain't a stupid. give me fucking stone age polynesia any day.
an adult should be able to plan an invasion you see.
Message 13/29 19-Apr-02 @ 07:08 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
The lofi seems to have raped it, but I still like where you are going with it.
Keep up the good work.
Message 14/29 19-Apr-02 @ 04:49 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 15/29 19-Apr-02 @ 06:25 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
try the link above ^^^^
Message 16/29 19-Apr-02 @ 06:56 PM Edit: 19-Apr-02 | 07:36 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
nothingewhere comes to mind.
Message 18/29 20-Apr-02 @ 12:38 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
just learn to spell then, no? save yourself some embarassment later on.
Message 19/29 20-Apr-02 @ 02:00 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
aliteration means.. alliteration
\Al*lit`er*a"tion\, n. [L. ad + litera letter. See Letter.] The repetition of the same letter or sound at the beginning of two or more words , or soundsimmediately succeeding each other, or at short intervals; as in the following lines:
thus.. aaliteration of synthetiq in in-intuition. .repetition of the a.. and in .. carries out the whole theme of this piece.. listen to the vocals as well.. the stuttering. and manipulation.. its about the repetition of technology driven (synthetic)intution.. like when your making a track and you accidently open the wrong vst.. but u go with it anyway and realize that it was the right instrument in the first place..
critique mah work not mah language
Message 20/29 20-Apr-02 @ 02:54 AM Edit: 20-Apr-02 | 10:19 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
but sure. youre an artist. you can do whatever you want!
I just like proper spelling. I also do like some of what youve done but I think youre a LITTLE too keen on the "writing for myself" thang.
Message 21/29 20-Apr-02 @ 11:20 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 22/29 20-Apr-02 @ 01:41 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
here's some aliteration
"never until the mankind making bird beast and flower fathering ..."
us welsh have got a whole poetry system involving aliteration and internal rhyme called "cynghanedd". do search for that or "englyn" if you want to now more.
poems&poets are much more in the fabric of life here;
on a stag do in aberystwyth we were in the pub and a famous poet came in for a drink, so we paid him a pound to write us an 'englyn' (kind of a haiku but with internal rhyme and aliteration) for the poor sod getting married, which was read out to much applause. poets name is iwan llwyd, he plays the bass too.
another poet/musician is twm morys, his father(?) is jan morris the travel writer, who had a sex change and is now a woman. twm morys therefore, is also colloquially known as "twm dau fam" - "tom two mothers"
Message 24/29 20-Apr-02 @ 04:26 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
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Message 26/29 21-Apr-02 @ 03:28 AM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
Message 28/29 21-Apr-02 @ 09:28 PM - RE: Updated my etiquitte....
all done in my best deliverance redneck accent.
it doesn't rhyme.
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